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Stephen Sturgeon
United States
Current Residence: United States
Favourite genre of music: Mettle
Operating System: Windows
Favourite cartoon character: Rapheal, Cheetor, Catwoman
Personal Quote: I'm the recovering caffeine addict that never recovered.

Yes it's finished. First a warning to parents. When I first set out to write this, I had hoped to make it kid friendly. And in a rather "Secret of NIMH" "Last Unicorn" kinda way, I think I may have succeeded. In case you missed the references, there's mild swearing and violence. Nothing that would rate even above a PG more than likely, but I always encourage parents to keep track of what their kids watch and read on the net.

And now for a person note here. When I started this, I was hoping it would fit into cartoon canon. I took a bit of a break when I reached the Nightmare Moon section so I could watch the season 4 premiere of FiM and adjust the final confrontation between Luna and Celestia accordingly to keep it in canon with the show.

Unfortunately, the episode not only irreparably ruined what I had planned for the fight, it also ruined what I'd already done in the Discord section as well. Seeing the previews, I knew they would show a lot of the Nightmare Moon/Celestia battle...but I didn't expect them to show the whole entire thing. I certainly wasn't expecting them to show the Discord battle. So...yeah. The fic was destroyed by canon before it was even finished being written.

Still, I decided to finish what I started, somewhat freed by the fact that I no longer even needed to make the attempt at keeping inside canon. That ship had sailed. So I hope you enjoy my take on the history of Equestria. Maybe a bit of personal bias, but I actually prefer this over my previous "Sisters at War" fic.

Here's a link to the Google document. In my opinion, it's easier to read and retains more of the font choices of the original.…

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EchoWing Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Is this the Caldwin I think it is?
If you're the EchoWing who posted "The Sun Also Rises" in the AllSparkle...*takes a peek at the gallery*...which I'm guessing you are...then yeah, I'm the Caldwin you think I am. And I promise, I will get around to reading that. It was a busy weekend. 
EchoWing Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, no worries; take your time. Anyway, thanks for watching me.
MissKaylaKaon Mar 6, 2014  New member
Hi Caldwin! Guess who!
Give me a moment...let me guess! :D 
I can't get onto the Allspark. Was I banned?
I just found out myself. Yeah, I'm afraid you were. I'm not sure what set it off. 

"Because of continuous abusive behavior (flaming, harassment, etc.) user has been permanently suspended from The Allspark.


EDIT: Alt-ID Celestia also banned"

That was posted in the User Warning log today. I'm sorry to hear that.

Can you find out why I was banned? I don't remember doing anything like that. Who did I harass?

Can you get me a mod's email or something so I can talk to them?

Something about this doesn't seem right...
All I know is what I already told you. I let Fnu and Zammuel know you're looking for them. Past that, I really don't know what to do. I don't know what the protocol is for challenging a ban. I really don't. I can try and look into it. But I really just don't know. 
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Lady-Autobot17 Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for llama and watch btw. :icondummyloveplz:
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